Sunday 23 March 2014

Simple Essay Structure and You Tube videos



If you are doing TOEFL IBT then you know you have speaking and writing sections to do along with all the listening and reading sections. Did you know that great speeches, pieces of writing and You Tube "talky" videos all have something in common - structure! There's other stuff too like vocabulary and interesting sentence construction but the main thing I am going to focus on here is the common structure you can use for the speaking and writing sections.

You may have seen this simple essay structure in the past but if you haven't, I will explain it for you. It is what I use to help my students with their writing.


Source: www.onlineteaching.humanities.curtin.edu.au
       

Introduction

Having decided on the main theme of your work (the thesis),the introduction is where you state what you are going to talk about. It is an inverted triangle because you should go from a general opening that may include a bit of history and background, to the actual point you are going to argue. 

Middle Paragraphs


Each paragraph represents one argument to back up the point you are making. It should begin with a topic sentence, should develop that topic and at the end, should restate strongly the topic of the paragraph and link to the next paragraph.

Conclusion


The triangle is the opposite of the introduction triangle because the opening of this paragraph is a restatement  of the thesis, followed by a summary of the arguments used, and speculation on whether different approaches to the question may be taken in the future due to future developments, for example.


If you follow this simple structure for your TOEFL writing and speaking exercises, it should help you to be more organised and to focus on the question you have been asked to answer. Of course, using this structure for other work such as speeches and You Tube videos is another possibility.


And to see great speech/essay structure in action, watch this TED Talk (or read the transcript)!

A historic moment in the Arab world

I hope this helps!



Thursday 27 February 2014

Yellowstone Wolves and Trophic Cascades

Yellowstone Wolves and Trophic Cascades

 

Source:Wikipedia History of Wolves in Yellowstone


I came across this video through Facebook and thought it was so good for a TOEFL subject and so fascinating too, that I decided to make a little listening exercise out of it.

This time, I will give you multiple choice questions which makes it closer to the TOEFL exam, in particular, the PBT.

As in the TOEFL exam, look at the questions as you listen - ignore the visuals until after you have done the questions, then watch again and enjoy the images! It is such a lovely, feel-good video!

Click on the link to the video here:

Yellowstone wolves 

Here are the questions:

1. What is this talk mainly about?

A The damage to Yellowstone caused by wolves
B The changes attributed to wolves to the ecosystem and physical geography of Yellowstone
C The animals that live in Yellowstone
D The habitats of all the different species in Yellowstone

2. A trophic cascade is

A a high waterfall
B the flow of rivers through a valley
C an ecological process starting at the top of the food chain and going to the bottom
D an ecological process to describe the change to the plains

3.  The reintroduction of wolves to Yellowstone in 1995 caused

A the deer population to increase in number
B the decline in the number of beavers
C the vegetation to grow back and the number of different species to increase
D more soil erosion

4. The rivers have become less ________ and the banks more __________

A polluted:unstable
B straight:rocky
C deep:steep
D meandering:stable

How did you do? Scroll down for the answers.....























1 B, 2 C, 3 C, 4 D

 









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